Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Elevator Pitch 2
This is my first pitch but I tried to take into consideration the comments and videos of other people that I saw. I mad sure that I created a pitch on the basis on what people would want and made sure it was easy, descriptive, and convenient. I believe there is room for improvement but as the idea continues than I would be able to be more descriptive and more resourceful.
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Hi! I like how comfortable and personable you make the audience feel. I think you sound slightly rehearsed. You should try speaking more naturally. I like how your idea will be more efficient and less time consuming. Also, it would save many people money because they won't be traveling around the store getting distracted by things they don't necessarily need. Overall, great job!
ReplyDeleteCheck out my Elevator No. 2!
http://nazani95.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2-week-7.html
As a shopper looking for frequent deals at Publix, this app would be a godsend. Also the aspect of having a shopping list that one can constantly refer to would remove the need for a physical list. All of this can be used in the real world by customers. Anyway if you want to check out my idea, it is available at: http://entspring16.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
ReplyDeleteI like the idea. This would be an app that I would use. I think you need to really focus on how to differentiate your app from preexisting apps that are similar. Maybe you could include healthy recipes, or even have it built in to your app that creates recipes based off of what you have on your list. Good luck
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