What stood out to me most was a comment that said to add maybe recipes and different components to take it all the way from the grocery store to the dinner plates at your house. Also, what I found was another piece of good advice was to make it sound natural. So I think I made it more natural and spoke more from the top of my head with a idea instead of word for word what I was going to say.
Hey Fernando, I think that this is a really great idea. If you could make an app that takes what people want to buy and finds specials and buy one get one free deals and point them to the store that would save you the most money, people would definitely get it. I think that you had a great elevator pitch too. You definitely seem very passionate about your app and that is what you want to get across to people you are pitching to. I agree that it is easier to just talk freely about your idea without a rigid script because it sounds much more natural. Great job on this assignment. Feel free to check out my blog post here: http://wsentrepreneurship.blogspot.com/2016/03/growing-my-social-capital.html
Hello- First off I love the name of your blog. I like how it is unique. I really like your idea as well. I often wonder why stores have not invested in that idea. I also think you presented your product very well. You made eye contact with the camera and you made your pitch simple enough to get the idea across very well. Great job! Check out mine:http://basmacirachel.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Love your idea! It's extremely efficient for us college students who love saving money if given the opportunity to have this app. This app would be perfect me because like many, I'm constantly busy with either my school work, classes or organizations. With an app like this I could just check if the things I want to buy are on sale rather than sorting through newspapers to find just one useful coupon. Thanks for sharing and great job on using your feedback to improve your elevator speech. Check out my post by clicking the link. http://jalekatircioglu.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hey Fernando,
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a really great idea. If you could make an app that takes what people want to buy and finds specials and buy one get one free deals and point them to the store that would save you the most money, people would definitely get it. I think that you had a great elevator pitch too. You definitely seem very passionate about your app and that is what you want to get across to people you are pitching to. I agree that it is easier to just talk freely about your idea without a rigid script because it sounds much more natural. Great job on this assignment. Feel free to check out my blog post here: http://wsentrepreneurship.blogspot.com/2016/03/growing-my-social-capital.html
Hello-
ReplyDeleteFirst off I love the name of your blog. I like how it is unique. I really like your idea as well. I often wonder why stores have not invested in that idea. I also think you presented your product very well. You made eye contact with the camera and you made your pitch simple enough to get the idea across very well. Great job!
Check out mine:http://basmacirachel.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Hi Fernando,
ReplyDeleteLove your idea! It's extremely efficient for us college students who love saving money if given the opportunity to have this app. This app would be perfect me because like many, I'm constantly busy with either my school work, classes or organizations. With an app like this I could just check if the things I want to buy are on sale rather than sorting through newspapers to find just one useful coupon. Thanks for sharing and great job on using your feedback to improve your elevator speech. Check out my post by clicking the link. http://jalekatircioglu.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html